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waiting around... by ~greymoonwolf:icongreymoonwolf:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open




pressing my fingers
following the furrow
in her brow
the friction of her frown
…is all that slows me down

feel it taut with tension
stringing my inhibitions
thin lines that slip around
to grip my arms
…and pin me down

the soothing murmur
of my listless temper
which could never hold a light
...can always hold me back
…as a stranger in the night
©2006-2009 ~greymoonwolf
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Submitted: December 23, 2006
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<3

"Let the world forgive the past
Let all the girls kiss the boys at last
Let me go
...Let me go"

~smashing pumpkins~
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~AngelsOfSilences:iconAngelsOfSilences: Dec 26, 2006, 7:58:10 PM
I love this one :heart: its amazing

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A million points of light
~greymoonwolf:icongreymoonwolf: Dec 27, 2006, 1:55:28 AM
:peace: thanks...im glad to here that stuff that comes
out of my head...that i used to throw into a box under
my bed can make someone happy haha :D

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"What? You want art?!
You take something entirely mundane, and you lie about it,
that's art..."
~greymoonwolf:icongreymoonwolf: Dec 27, 2006, 1:56:18 AM
i just realized the awesome unintentional ryhme in what i just wrote and had to laugh about it hahahahaha

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"What? You want art?!
You take something entirely mundane, and you lie about it,
that's art..."
~gothic-mosha:icongothic-mosha: Jan 3, 2007, 4:01:57 AM
brilliant! i may reccomend this for the rawem0tion spotlight. =D :+fav:

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Round here James Dean reigns supreme and we don't give a f*ck about y'all, see?
~greymoonwolf:icongreymoonwolf: Jan 3, 2007, 11:32:39 AM
:D that would be cool haha

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"What? You want art?!
You take something entirely mundane, and you lie about it,
that's art..."
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~push-my-button:iconpush-my-button: Jan 14, 2007, 12:43:13 PM
a stranger in the night is somthing i woulld not expect to know how i felt untill one day walking s stranger said to me it will get better like he knew all my problems so now waht makes then strangers if they know how we feel

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its not your fault i breath its mine for i can not stop
~push-my-button:iconpush-my-button: Jan 14, 2007, 12:44:03 PM
a stranger in the night is somthing i woulld not expect to know how i felt untill one day walking s stranger said to me it will get better like he knew all my problems so now waht makes then strangers if they know how we feel

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its not your fault i breath its mine for i can not stop
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